I previously knew Nasty Little Press solely through having reviewed one of their chapbooks - Martin Figura's Boring The Arse Off Young People - for Sphinx. But they also publish ultra-compact pamphlets to give readers a taste of their poets, or to introduce new writers.
Now, Lizzy Dening, the young poet who's the subject of Nasty Little Intro #2, isn't, strictly speaking, a new writer where I'm concerned. I've heard her read in Cambridge, and also come across her poems in magazines. I won't try to review the pamphlet as such, because I'd probably end up giving too much away, and at £2 there's really no reason not to try it for yourself, but all five poems are taut, quietly surprising, and hugely promising.
Nasty Little Press describe it, and their other mini-selections, as the perfect accompaniment to a train journey, or a long, hot bath. I won't argue with that.
Thursday, 2 February 2012
Wednesday, 1 February 2012
What's new?
It's always nice to welcome a new literary magazine or webzine on to the scene, especially when it's one based in the Midlands (sorry, let my regionalism get the better of me there). Jane Holland's behind Epicentre Magazine, and I like the fact that she's planning to run it with rolling updates, rather than on an issue-by-issue basis. As she points out, that's what Stride has been doing for years, and doing very well - it's certainly the webzine that I read most regularly.
If you look down my sidebar, you'll also see a button that links to the excellent Talking Naturally website. Charlie Moores is the man behind it, and the podcasts and 'Conference Calls' in particular are highly recommended.
If you look down my sidebar, you'll also see a button that links to the excellent Talking Naturally website. Charlie Moores is the man behind it, and the podcasts and 'Conference Calls' in particular are highly recommended.
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Monday, 30 January 2012
Poetry Bites revisited
I’ve been away in Cardiff for the last
three days, so I’ve got a bit behind with what I intended to blog. I caught up
with some old friends, I ate a lot, I drank too much, and I did a lot of good
birding around Kenfig NNR, Newport Wetlands, Ogmore and Southerndown. The
latter two were places we went to on holiday every year when I was a kid (my
grandparents lived in Bridgend), so I’ve got a big soft spot for them. I’ll
return to them later in the week – they figure in a post about pub signs I've
been meaning to write for a while.
But while I remember, I want to talk about
last Tuesday’s Poetry Bites, at the Kitchen Garden Café in King’s Heath. Let’s
start by saying it’s a great venue – intimate and easy to project to when you’re
reading, but not at all cramped. The food’s very nice, too – chips just like my
mum used to make.
Most importantly, there was a large and
very attentive audience – what more can you ask for as a poet? I read two
15-minute slots, mainly from hydrodaktulopsychicharmonica, but including a few
older and newer poems too. I sold quite a few books, and I sat back and enjoyed
some really excellent open mic slots, including one young man who delivered a
long poem entirely from memory at breakneck speed. Normally, that's not a good
thing, but this absolutely demanded such a delivery, and very impressive it
was.
I haven't got the dates to hand at the
moment (more info is available here),
but the March guest will be Ira Lightman, followed by Clare Best in May, both
really fine poets. It was actually as quick and easy to get to from Coalville
as central Nottingham, so I'll certainly get alongf to future events.
Wednesday, 25 January 2012
A toast...
Tonight is, of course, Burns Night, and while I have no Scottish ancestry that I'm aware of, I'm all for anything that involves the national celebration of a poet, along with the eating of haggis (you can keep the neeps) and the drinking of a single malt or two.
Following on from the big night this year, there's an event taking place in Dumfries this Friday and Saturday, from 7.30pm-11pm, called First Foot @ The Stove. It includes an international art project, conceived and curated by Hugh Bryden and David Borthwick, called Windows On Burns Night. A whole host of poets wrote a piece of their work onto clear plastic, to be displayed on windows around the town. There are more details on it here.
My own poem, Prayer, appears at The Globe. I doubt if I'll be able to get up to Dumfries anytime soon, but I'm proud to have been involved in this project.
Funnily enough, at Monday night's Shindig in Leicester, Burns made a wholly unscheduled appearance. I've talked before about how little themes seem to emerge at each reading, and in the first half of Monday's, mice kept cropping up, especially in John Lucas's fine spot. He read at least as many poems by other people as his own, but it worked extremely well. Jane Commane of Nine Arches Press then challenged someone to read Burns' To A Mouse in the second half. I assumed that the gauntlet would remain on the ground, but Nick Leach took it up magnificently, reading the poem absolutely superbly.
The rest of the night saw great readings from Helen Calcutt and Jessica Mayhew (sadly, Phil Brown couldn't make it), and the usual excellent mix of open mic slots, including a couple of collborations.
Last night, I was reading at Poetry Bites, of which much more later in the week. In the meantime, I'm going to be having a quiet night of it, with a book or two and a large glass of Caol Ila. Here's to Rabbie...
Following on from the big night this year, there's an event taking place in Dumfries this Friday and Saturday, from 7.30pm-11pm, called First Foot @ The Stove. It includes an international art project, conceived and curated by Hugh Bryden and David Borthwick, called Windows On Burns Night. A whole host of poets wrote a piece of their work onto clear plastic, to be displayed on windows around the town. There are more details on it here.
My own poem, Prayer, appears at The Globe. I doubt if I'll be able to get up to Dumfries anytime soon, but I'm proud to have been involved in this project.
Funnily enough, at Monday night's Shindig in Leicester, Burns made a wholly unscheduled appearance. I've talked before about how little themes seem to emerge at each reading, and in the first half of Monday's, mice kept cropping up, especially in John Lucas's fine spot. He read at least as many poems by other people as his own, but it worked extremely well. Jane Commane of Nine Arches Press then challenged someone to read Burns' To A Mouse in the second half. I assumed that the gauntlet would remain on the ground, but Nick Leach took it up magnificently, reading the poem absolutely superbly.
The rest of the night saw great readings from Helen Calcutt and Jessica Mayhew (sadly, Phil Brown couldn't make it), and the usual excellent mix of open mic slots, including a couple of collborations.
Last night, I was reading at Poetry Bites, of which much more later in the week. In the meantime, I'm going to be having a quiet night of it, with a book or two and a large glass of Caol Ila. Here's to Rabbie...
Andy Brown at Peony Moon
I really enjoyed reading the new work by Andy Brown posted at Michelle McGrane's superlative Peony Moon - the poems are from his new Salt collection, The Fool and the Physician.
He's one of those poets who seems effortlessly able to write out of a number of different traditions and 'schools', and while I suppose you can't always trust blurbs, in this case you should! Luke Kennard, John Burnside and Lee Harwood all have good things to say about him, and I'm not going to argue with a triumvirate like that.
Anyway, Andy's Fall of the Rebel Angels: Poems 1996-2006 is a book I go back to a lot, so I look forward to reading the new collection.
He's one of those poets who seems effortlessly able to write out of a number of different traditions and 'schools', and while I suppose you can't always trust blurbs, in this case you should! Luke Kennard, John Burnside and Lee Harwood all have good things to say about him, and I'm not going to argue with a triumvirate like that.
Anyway, Andy's Fall of the Rebel Angels: Poems 1996-2006 is a book I go back to a lot, so I look forward to reading the new collection.
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Tuesday, 24 January 2012
Poetry Bites - tonight!
I'm reading at the Kitchen Garden Cafe, on York Road, King's Heath, Birmingham, tonight (Tuesday) from 7.30pm. There are more details here, and open mic slots are available to sign up for on the door. Come along if you're in the area.
Wednesday, 18 January 2012
Leicester Shindig! returns
Crystal Clear Creators and Nine Arches Press are staging their latest Shindig! open mic reading at The Western,
Western Road, Leicester, next Monday from 7.30pm. As usual it's free and open to all, and you can sign up for open mic slots at the door.
Featured poets are Jessica
Mayhew, John Lucas, Phil Brown and Helen Calcutt.
Jessica Mayhew is 22, and is
part way through her degree at the University of Northampton, where she is
studying English Literature and Creative Writing. A pamphlet, Someone Else's
Photograph, will be published by Crystal Clear Creators in March 2012.
Phil Brown teaches English in Sutton and
has been regularly writing poetry for about 10 years. In 2009 he was
shortlisted for the Crashaw Prize and won the Eric Gregory Award in 2010. His debut collection, Il Avilit, has
just been published by Nine Arches Press. He is the Poetry Editor for the
online magazine and chapbook publisher, Silkworms Ink.
John Lucas’s most recent book is Next Year
Will Be Better: A Memoir of England in the 1950s. He runs Shoestring Press.
Helen Calcutt was born in 1988 and grew up
in the West Midlands, with familial roots in South West Wales. Her first
pamphlet collection is forthcoming next year with Perdika. She works as a visiting writer for, among
others, Creative Alliance, Writing West Midlands, and The Young People’s
Writing Squads. She was awarded an Arvon writing Grant in
September 2011.
Looks a great line-up as usual - I'm looking forward to getting hold of Phil Brown's collection.
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Tuesday, 17 January 2012
Ink, Sweat and Tears
I have a new poem, Chirimoya, published at Ink, Sweat & Tears (you may have to scroll down a little). It's a great webzine - there are new poems, reviews, etc appearing there all the time, so keep an eye on it.
Monday, 9 January 2012
An interview with Isobel Dixon
I met Isobel Dixon at the London launch of Sidekick Books wonderful Birdbook I last summer - her Upupa Epops (you're all such keen birders that you don't need me to tell you what species that's the scientific name of, do you?) is one of the volume's highlights, for me, and a good taster for the superb collection in which it appears, The Tempest Prognosticator.
She was born in Umtata, South Africa, and came to
Scotland to study in 1993. She works in London as a literary agent,
representing a range of clients, including many prominent South African
writers. Her work is included in publications like The Paris Review, The Guardian, Penguin’s Poems for Love, The Forward
Book of Poetry and The Best of
British Poetry 2011. Her first collection Weather Eye won South Africa’s Sanlam and Olive Schreiner Prizes.
Her second collection A Fold in the Map
was published in the UK by Salt and in South Africa by Jacana, and The Tempest Prognosticator, is published
in the UK by Salt and in South Africa by Random House’s Umuzi imprint. It’s
been described as “a virtuoso collection” by J M Coetzee and an “ingenious
carousel of a book” by David Morley.
One of the things I
enjoyed most about this collection was the vividly African flavour of many of
the poems, both in subject matter and in the language used. How often do you
get back to South Africa, and do you find that an essential spark to your
creativity?
I’m glad you can feel Africa in it, even though there’s a
wider ranger of themes and settings than in the more overtly homesick and
family-focused A Fold in the Map. There’s a lot more London, Yorkshire, England
in The Tempest Prognosticator, partly reflecting how long I’ve lived and worked
on this island. But South Africa remains essential to my life and writing. I go
back twice a year, for publishing work and to see family and friends, and just to
be at home in the Karoo for a while. My mother still lives in the house where I
and my sisters grew up, and this old house and my home town Graaff-Reinet remain
crucial places for me. I was thinking of
it as I wrote as a harbour or dry dock and the phrase ‘refreshment station’
keeps popping into my mind – what the Dutch East India Company called the
settlement at the Cape, a place for sailors to pick up fresh water and fruit
and vegetables on their long sea journeys. A way to prevent emotional scurvy,
perhaps…!
Strangely, I don’t write a lot when I’m back in the Cape
(both Western and Eastern), because there is so much else to pack into the
days, but I do take a lot of notes, jotting down ideas all the time. The long
drives between towns, through my country’s glorious landscapes, are also
fruitful thinking times, and some poems invariably emerge after I leave,
sometimes even on the return flight. Aeroplanes and trains seem to be essential
to my writing too…A virtue of frequent necessity perhaps.
Just a word, too, about your writing processes. The Tempest
Prognosticator holds together very well as a themed collection, but was equally
enjoyable to dip in and out of. Was it a case of writing ‘occasional’ poems
that started to cohere around a central point?
Some of the poems in The Tempest Prognosticator have
travelled a long way, several pre-dating my previous collection A Fold in the
Map.
In both A Fold in the Map and The Tempest Prognosticator I
have some poems that were first published in my South African debut collection Weather
Eye, which is no longer in print, though you can find the odd copy on the web. Weather
Eye was never widely distributed outside South Africa and while it was a very
important book for me, as all first books are to their creators, I wanted to
give some of those early poems a new life in a new context. When I came to put
together the manuscript for my second
collection I realised that there were narrative
family poems like Plenty and the title poem Weather Eye which fitted well
into the divided shape of what became my
first UK publication A Fold in the Map – where the first half mainly looks back
to childhood and my country of birth, often from the vantage point of the UK;
and where the second half traces my father’s illness and death, that terrible
journey we made together as a family, coping with the process of loss. While I
was writing constantly, out of my own need, when my father first became
seriously ill, I had no intention of publishing the resulting poems, not till
later when my mother and sisters had read them, and they’d grown to form some
narrative arc of their own. But I didn’t want a collection that was just about
grief, I wanted to show some of the fullness too, more of the light, and so the
two halves took shape together.
So there were many poems I’d already written by the time A
Fold in the Map was published that just weren’t right for the form and tone of
that collection, and I knew I would use them in another very different
collection later. Poems like Vision, the opening poem of The Tempest
Prognosticator, which appeared in The Wolf in 2004, or Days of Miracle and Wonder which
was in The Paris Review the same year.
The poems of The Tempest Prognosticator are poems that
spring from many interlinked concerns and fascinations – like the South African
natural scientist and poet Eugene Marais, whose writing inspired Toktokkie
and The Inopportune Baboon, and perhaps some more work to come. There are
poems that spring from love of travel, art, film, and a fascination with
aspects of the quirkiness of life and human inventiveness, as in the title
poem, about a Victorian device which used leeches to predict storms. Maybe
because I grew up in an extremely dry part of the world where everyone is a
sky-watcher and rain-measurer, I am also a little obsessed with ideas of the
weather…
So the new collection jettisons family in favour of animals
– but that’s not to say I’ve switched my concerns completely, the collection is
just a different beast for a different season. I am slowly writing a series of
poems about my mother too, but that’s for some time ahead.
There’s a veritable bestiary in there, too. I liked the
balance struck between exact description of animals, birds, even insects, and
their metaphorical use. Is that something that’s always been a part of your
poetry?
I was once asked at a reading if I wrote so much about
animals and insects because I don’t like people… But I think (hope) the human
is very present in even the most creaturely of The Tempest Prognosticator
poems.
But yes, nature, the creatures, have always been a part of
the writing. Again because it’s all always been, completely naturally, part of
my life. We ran quite wild as kids, in wide open but safe spaces, far from the
city. A big garden at the back of our own house, a small town in a horsehoe of
(mostly dry) river, surrounded by the Karoo plains and mountains. Every holiday
spent on my uncle’s farm, involved in the daily work. Two of my sisters live on a farm, one of my sisters is a
painter who does a lot of Karoo landscapes,
and we all love walking, the African outdoors, the wildlife. The eldest and
youngest have just been on a tent safari holiday in Botswana together and I’m feeling
very envious (though I like to keep a whole lot further away from the crocs and
hippos than my adventurous heroine, Mary Kingsley of Beetle, Fish &
Fetish, did…). I think the first
rambling free verse poem I wrote as a kid was about the Karoo and drought…And
the natural world is just so rich and present, a realm of endless fascination,
and the more you learn, as well as observe personally, the more amazing it all
seems. Much as I love London, I often need to get away from the relentlessly
urban, both in reality and in imagination.
So the idea of a tapestry made of spider silk, as in Silking the Spider, was irresistible, or the confluence of nature and art, the
making and remaking of Damien Hirst’s pickled shark in Requiem. It’s why I
love Eugene Marais’s writing in The Soul of the Ape and The Soul of the White
Ant, groundbreaking work and writing from a tragic life. It’s why I was drawn
to Mary Kingsley’s brilliant and witty observations of the West African jungle,
which I plundered for Beetle, Fish & Fetish, or Robert Byron’s odd, funny
and moving anecdote about an over-affectionate wild boar in The Road to Oxiana,
which I recast in The Poor Wild Boar Who Went Too Far. These last two poems
were both written as part of a commission for The Travel Bookshop (now sadly
closed) in 2010.
Which links to to your ‘occasional poems’ question earlier.
For this, as with several of the themed group projects that led to poems in the
collection (like the Pink Floyd and English Counties nights), I was involved in
initiating and organising the event. So along with Simon Barraclough and
Richard Price, I spent several happy hours in the Travel Bookshop, with more
fantastic source material than I could mine in a year. Other poems also came
from commissions for books or events: Mountain War Time for Roddy Lumsden’s 50
States event, and Upupa Epops and A Parliament of Gulls, written for
Kirsten Irving and Jon Stone’s lovely Birdbook I, a chance I’ll admit I seized on
with gull-like greed. I’d never set up or take up a commission that didn’t
chime with something I wanted to write, but I do like the creative pressure
that comes from writing to a certain theme, and of course, a deadline.
A final note on ‘the bestiary’ is that for the South African
launch of The Tempest Prognosticator my
sister Janet organised an art exhibition in her gallery, ArtKaroo, in
Oudtshoorn, where two South African artists, Leanette Botha and Susqya
Williams, produced visual interpretations of some of the poems. It was fascinating to see their vision of the
creatures – the boars, zebras, lizards,
baboons, orang-utans, camels, toktokkies, ostriches and more taking vigorous
and colourful shape off the page. You can see a selection here.
Following on from that, is your first collection, Weather
Eye, still available anywhere?
Only here and there on the web and from second hand dealers
– as mentioned before, there are Weather Eye traces in A Fold in the Map and The
Tempest Prognosticator, though there are poems that are published solely in the
debut book. I only have a few copies left myself.
Other highlights for me were some absolutely exquisite short
poems – A Mess Of Vinegar, Only Adapt, Paradox and valentine among them. I
occasionally suspect that such shorter pieces get a bit undervalued in
contemporary British poetry – do you think that’s the case?
Thank you, that’s wonderful to hear. I’m a fan of the short
poem myself – not just the subtlety of the haiku, but also short sharp shocks
of poems. Emily Dickinson’s brilliance in her spare dashed lines, Les Murray’s Poems
the Size of Photographs, and so many more.
There’s talk of a return of greater appreciation for the
short story, the essay, the novella, perhaps because we are not so restricted
by the bound format and read our texts in so many ways these days, including
the web and Kindles and Kobos, and all the devices still being developed and
named. Maybe it’s that way with the short poem too – though it’s never been out
of favour with readers, I believe, despite not being seen as substantial enough
to win poetry prizes when up against longer work, and not published as much in
journals. It’s great to see Magma launch their new short poem prize, for poems
of up to 10 lines. Penguin’s Poems for Love anthology, edited by Laura Barber,
includes a very short two-liner poem of mine, truce (not yet in a collection).
Perhaps love (and hate) poems, in the tradition of Catullus’s Odi et Amo are
perfect for that short, sharp, shock treatment…
Finally, I wonder how your day job as a literary agent
affects your poetry, if at all?
I’m lucky to have a completely absorbing passion for my
professional life, a job where no two days, or books, or authors, are alike. It
is pretty full-on though, and work and private life aren’t very boundaried. The
poetry weaves its way between this, in early mornings, late nights, weekends
between manuscript reading. I’m never without a notebook and various pens (nothing
worse than being on an overnight flight when your only pen’s just erupted.) My
own writer clients are a great example in their focus, dedication and hard
work.
Commissions and joint projects do help to keep the poetry
from being completely swamped by my job. The rigour of a deadline’s very useful
here. So I’m working on a production for this year’s centenary of the sinking
of the Titanic, along with poets Chris McCabe and Simon Barraclough, musician and
composer Oliver Barrett, and film-maker Jack Wake-Walker. I will be following
that with an art and poetry project with Scottish artist Douglas Robertson. More
weather, and more creatures, in view with those two….
To buy The Tempest Prognosticator, click here.
Three poems from The Tempest Prognosticator
Upupa Epops
Scarce
passage migrant regular enough to skim the south
of
this glib outcrop with your pied and pinkish now-and-then
but
still, erratic flitter on the wing, old vaudevillean,
knowing
that you’ll cause a flutter on the wires.
A
prophet less respected in those backyard days
you
poked about our frazzled lawn, a dandy priest.
Familiarity
and all the blah it breeds.
Who
knew, so dapper in your black-barred
cinnamon-cum-chestnut
raiment, you’d turn out to be,
back
home, a smelly nester of the first degree?
The
sins fine feathers and a rather natty crest can hide.
Oop-oop-oops,
indeed.
Your
Giant St Helena Ancestor went dodo,
long
before Napoleon and the Giant Earwig did.
But
still you pop up here and there, to stride and plunge
that
beaky scythe, delving the underworld for breakfast –
spiders
easy over, ant lions sunny side up,
a
take-out gogga, kriek or two to feed the brood.
You
foul your hidden clutch of milky-blue. Tree-caved,
surviving
critters shit at probing eyes, and hiss like snakes.
Only Adapt
Observe the sand gazelle
who with a shrinking heart
survives the drought –
an admirable desert art,
this making small, a skill
that we who doubt
the seasonal largesse
must learn as well.
Paradox
There’s no telling what
will make the heart leap, frog-
like, landing with a soggy plop.
Love startles, makes a mockery
of us, and yet we lie awake
at night and croak and croak for it.
Saturday, 7 January 2012
Poetry Bites
I'm reading at Poetry Bites, at the Kitchen Garden Cafe, King's Heath, Birmingham, on January 24th, starting at 7.30pm. There are more details at this Facebook page - hope to see you there.
Meanwhile, Polyolbion will be swinging back into action on Monday with an interview with Isobel Dixon, plus poems from her excellent Salt collection The Tempest Prognosticator.
Meanwhile, Polyolbion will be swinging back into action on Monday with an interview with Isobel Dixon, plus poems from her excellent Salt collection The Tempest Prognosticator.
Friday, 6 January 2012
Up for grabs
Fancy being the Poet Laureate of Stamford? There's details here of a competition with that as the prize. It's a wonderfully historic town, and of course has a poetic pedigree, with John Clare having grown up and lived a mile or two down the road at Helpston, so it could be very interesting.
Monday, 19 December 2011
An interview with Simon Barraclough
I'm enjoying trying to come up with some Best of 2011 lists, with the usual agonising decisions about what to leave out and what to include. One collection that will definitely make the poetry list, though, and which I would imagine will figure on many a list by lit journos, bloggers and readers, is Neptune Blue, by Simon Barraclough. I talked to him about it, and poetry in general...
Neptune
Blue struck me as being
a product of the polar opposite of ‘second collection syndrome’ – it’s
absolutely jam-packed with ideas and diverse sources of inspiration. Is that a
result of being a very active poet, in terms of doing readings, writing for
commissions, organising events, etc?
That’s nice to
hear. ‘Second collection syndrome’ sounds ominous. I think there’s truth in
what you say: the more involved and engaged I am with events, commissions and
other writers the more stimulated I’m likely to be and possibly the more likely
I am to come into contact with new ideas or themes. But I’m also quite lucky in
that I always seem to have several ideas on the go at once and many projects
I’m always trying to find time for. This may not last forever but for now the
ideas, subjects and sequences continue to vie for attention.
Following
on from what you were saying about having a lot of ideas going on
simultaneously, I was wondering about how the book came together (or your first
collection, for that matter). Is it a case of identifying what you feel are
going to be pretty central poems early on, and then letting the rest of the
collection coalesce around them, or is it a more strictly planned process?
The growth of a
collection is quite mysterious I think: maybe a bit like how a planet or solar
system is formed. There’s a certain amount of matter, dust and poetic gas
floating around and then it cools and shrinks and gravity begins to heat all the
particles up again. After Los Alamos Mon Amour I got quite a lot of
commissions and published 17 of them in the mini-book Bonjour Tetris,
which gave me a small core of new poems to work around. So I took 6 or 7 of
those for whatever the next book would be and before I knew it I'd started two
sequences around the same time: the planet poems and the ___________ Heart
poems. The planets was something I realised I’d always wanted to do in response
to my love of Holst’s planet suite and the Hearts came out of an odd little
dream in which my heart had been replaced by a starfish. It was a very vivid,
tactile dream: quite disturbing, and it kicked off a whole chain of odd little
poems about Hearts. Finding a title for the book came down to a tussle between
the hearts and planets but Neptune Blue won out as I just liked its
simple music and Neptune is probably my favourite of the planet poems.
So that was 9
planets (I retain Pluto with a mild touch of irony), 11 Hearts, plus the
7 from Tetris, making up about half of a new book. I then blended in
other poems I thought were good enough and loosely related to some of the
themes I’d already written and then, as happened towards the end of Los
Alamos, I had a bit of a writing spurt that produced
around 6 new poems I thought would fit in well. I also wanted one closer to cap
off the collection and that came in the form of Sol, my poem written
from the point of view of the Sun, looking back from her perspective on all the
planets I’d written about earlier.
That final poem
has propelled me down another path and since Neptune Blue came out, I’ve
written about 20 Sunspot poems and have a crazy plan to write 121 of
them. This is to do with the 11-year sunspot cycle. Bit nerdy, but I like to
have these buried structures when I write.
I like the
astronomical analogy, and I think you've answered my next question, too, about
the Heart and Planet poems. You've touched, too, upon the ‘buried
structures’ you use in writing sequences or putting together a collection.
Within individual poems, form seems to work very much in the same way for you –
would that be fair?
I’ve always enjoyed
using and reading form but I think I use it less often these days. At least, I
don’t think I adhere to a strict form throughout that many single poems unless
the subject really demands it. I tend to use form and formal patterns as a kind
of underlying skeleton but I’m quite happy to break its rules for certain
passages of a poem if the rhythm, rhetoric, line break, appearance on the page
demand it.
I think in that
respect the new book is freer than Los Alamos was and changes gears more
readily within a single poem. It’s an odd analogy but I like to think of the
songs of Frank Black and how tracks like I Heard Ramona Sing seem to
have two or three intros and then sudden shifts of structure in the verses. In Neptune
Blue, I think the poems Earth and SoBe It have a little of
this quality I’m grasping at. But I’m maybe not my best reader and may be well
off the mark. And then the shorter Heart poems, I’m thinking mainly of Tapestry
Heart, seem almost formless. Is there something in
this? What do you think?
I think
that’s exactly right! I tend to find myself drawing musical analogies a lot
when I’m reading poetry, and Frank Black and the Pixies sprang to mind more
than once during Neptune Blue. And of course those dynamic shifts create a
certain zoom-in, zoom-out effect in places, which works well with the
astronomical themes. It brings me back to your writing processes again – do you
have any particular rituals, or ideal conditions? I almost always find myself
writing in the evening, even if I’ve had a completely clear day.
I really don’t
think I have any rituals. I tend to write at my desk at home, looking out over
London (I’m on the 10th floor and am treated to spectacular skies and sunsets
almost every day), although I can write in cafes and at airports when I need
to. So I suppose the place I write is fairly constant. I can write at any time
of day. I love the idea of writing through the night but I’m usually too tired
to be effective if it’s really late.
I make notes in
longhand but I can only write poems on my computer these days. At some point in
the last 10 years my imagination became more comfortable with a keyboard than a
pen. It doesn’t help that my handwriting looks quite nice but is 80% illegible
to me. Most ideas now go straight into a long .txt file, which gets saved and
copied here and there in case I lose my laptop. I used to like writing in
pencil because it felt freer and more flexible than pen and now I find the
format-less text file is the pencil to Word’s pen, if
that makes sense. I don’t write every day and I have no set hours but I do
think about writing almost all the time (I imagine that’s the case with you and
most poets too)?
I read something
about James Joyce when I was a teenager that really affected me. I used to fuss
about stationery: the right pen and notebook and so on but then I read how
Joyce would write on anything with anything: crayons, bits of torn up paper,
whatever was available, and from then on I dropped all notions of ‘the right
tools’ or ‘the right ambience’.
Yes, I
think I’ve gradually gone towards the same sort of system – Notepad to Word
with some occasional scribblings by hand. Ever since I learned shorthand in my
mid-20s, though, my handwriting’s been so appalling that I can rarely read it
back properly. I identify with what you say about thinking about writing all
the time. How does that fit in with your day job(s)? I’m conscious of being
very lucky in having a job that involves a lot of time on my own, and in which
I’m writing anyway (so I can hammer away at the keyboard writing a poem or
notes for one while people think I’m typing up a report).
Well for the last
seven years I’ve worked either freelance or part-time, so I have quite a lot of
time and space for writing. Doesn’t mean I use the time well, of course, but I
do my best. Writing is too solitary an activity, so I like to mix it up with
events and collaborations as much as I can. Even when I’m working though, I
often have one of those text files open where I can ‘jot’ down ideas and scraps
of poetry when they hit.
Going back
to Neptune Blue, the Heart poems were a highlight for me, I think partly
because they manage to be both extremely playful, and at times, extremely dark.
Is that opposition, or balance, something you consciously strive for?
Well, I’m always
happy when people think that I’ve achieved that kind of balance. It’s
clearly important to me to combine the light and the dark, the painful and the
comical. I have an entirely savoury tooth when it comes to food and I think
it’s safe to say I have the same when it comes to literature. Samuel Beckett
has always been a touchstone for me but it’s his laugh-out-loud moments (often
provoked by comic hyperbole, such as when Mrs. Rooney in All That Fall
struggles to get into a car and declaims: “Christ what a planet!”) that I love
every bit as much as the ditches of despair.
Perhaps I’m also
reacting to the cliché that ‘poetry is all hearts and flowers’. Even if that
were the case, who’s to say those flowers and hearts can’t be twisted, painful,
funny, fascinating, surprising? I’m not saying mine are, but one tries. And
what is more complex, more sunny and yet more benighted than the poor old human
heart?
Absolutely.
I think another reason they work is the way they blur the lyric "I"
so well – you’re never sure as a reader whether you’re dealing with a multiplicity
of hearts, and voices, or the many different facets of one. And I guess that
goes hand in hand with the light and dark. Would that be fair?
I think so. When I
wrote them I wasn’t sure about those things either. The ‘characters’ of the
hearts in question grew out of the imagery and language and developed along
their own paths, somehow. They seemed to have their own, speedy,
particle-momentum. I think that’s why they’re quite short. There’s a bit of me
in each of them but a large proportion of each feels alien to me too. That’s
it: they’re alien hearts.
Your
Italophilia is a thread that keeps resurfacing in the collection, too. Can you
tell me a bit about how that developed (I speak as someone rapidly developing
Hispanophilia)?
Ah, enjoy your new
philia. I’ve had mine for many years now and I think I can trace it as far back
as hearing Rossini in the cot. Something like that, to be dangerously (and
probably mendaciously) romantic. Funny you mention this, as I tend to think
it’s less obvious in Neptune than it is in Los Alamos but I could
be wrong. It amuses me that, being such an Italophile, so many French words and
French references creep into the poems and into my titles.
I started studying
Italian seriously about six years ago after years and years of procrastinating
and buying books like Italian in your Lunchtime or Italian Without
Italian and all the other quick-fixes that never work. So I hired a private
tutor to come to my home twice a week for about 14 months and since then I’ve
taken courses, hired a second tutor occasionally, and tend to study a little
every day. And I mainly go to Italy when I travel.
I remember going to
Venice in 2003 and only knowing about five words of Italian and being really
frustrated and angry with myself. I vowed then I wouldn’t return until I’d put
some work in and so my next trip was to Turin in 2005 after three months of
quite intense study. It’s inevitable that it should creep into my writing, I
suppose, and it’s only going to get worse as I’m preparing to do some
translating this year. I just love the country and the people, the climate, the
food and the culture but I’m not starry eyed about it. I’m aware of the darker
aspects of Italy and I hear plenty about them from my Italian friends, believe
me. In a funny way, I think the ‘worse’ Italy becomes, the more friends it
needs. Maybe that goes for all countries, all people.
And of course
Italian is a wonderfully musical language and being able to read old and new
poets, while still difficult at times, is a joy and perhaps helps me with my
writing? Not sure.
Ah, you’ve
pre-empted my next question – I was going to ask if you had the urge to
translate. Which poets are you going to be working on?
Through a series of
happy coincidences I came to befriend the novelist and poet Giuliano Dego and
was surprised that his epic historical-satirical poem La Storia in Rima hasn’t
been translated into English yet. We’ve agreed that I will make a start on Canto
I (there are 10 in total) and, with some input from him, we’ll see how I get
on.
It presents many
challenges of course, primarily because it’s written in ottava rima (Giuliano
has published a fine translation of Canto I of Don Juan and is a huge fan of
Byron) and there just aren’t as many rhymes available in English as there are
in Italian. But we’re agreed that the new version must have its own English
poetry and not follow the original too slavishly. I’ve got so much on that I
think the process will be a slow one. But probably all the better for that.
Italy is the country of the slow food movement after all...
Your last
answer tied in with something I’ve been thinking about a lot this week – how
long I take to (a) write a poem, and (b) revise it and send it out to a mag.
I’ve been making a conscious effort to be much slower in this, with the result
that new poems seem to be arriving ‘complete’ (but not ‘finished’). The danger,
I suppose, is that it might stifle any embryonic poems that really demand to be
spontaneous, and of the moment. Any thoughts on this?
While the
translating is incredibly slow, I find I’m writing new material quite quickly.
For that reason I’m just letting it flow for now and I’m going to go back and
revise it all carefully later. I think I’m going to have a whole focused book
to work on, which is unusual and should be an interesting experience in terms
of shaping, organising and setting up currents and patterns within it. So I
think I’m being spontaneous with a view to being more methodical later. Best of
both worlds? Having my cake and editing it? Then again, a couple of the Heart
poems in Neptune must have taken minutes to write, while SoBe It was
started 11 years ago...each poem has its own needs I suppose.
Other than
the translations, do you have any pet projects, any books within you that you
desperately want to write? I’ve been surprised (though probably shouldn't have
been) by how many poets have.
Oh, well this Sun
book has become one of them for me and my research is taking my mind on a rich
and varied journey. I’ve always wanted to write a long poetic account of the
loss of the USS Indianapolis in 1945 and even went as far as applying for a
grant to support research but wasn’t lucky that time around. I’ve tinkered with
a book along the lines of How Laurel and Hardy Can Change Your Life and
there’s another much cherished prose project I’m not even going to mention!
Superstition.
I’ll ask
the same thing that I asked Mark Burnhope recently – which one thing would you
do to enthuse schoolkids about poetry (it can be as little as exposing them to
a particular poem)?
That’s a good
question. Over the last few years I’ve tried all kinds of techniques to get
schoolchildren excited about reading and writing poetry. I don’t think one poem
or method has been uniquely successful but I do find that some kind of
interactive, ludic approach works well. By which I mean things like composing
poems according to randomly generated or brainstormed ‘rules’ for each line;
physically chopping up a sonnet into 14 lines and asking groups to try and
reconstitute the poem ‘correctly’ (many fruitful discussions about form and
meaning arise from the ‘incorrect’ versions produced); working with short
syllabic forms, such as haiku or Fibonaccis.
I once presented a
class with Giles Goodland’s excellent poem ‘The Bees’ and after reading it
together a few times I asked everyone to circle bits of the language that
‘disturbed’ them in some way, be it through pleasure, confusion, rhythm,
imagery, nonsensical moments or any other reason, and we ended up having a
fascinating discussion about what the poem was doing and how. It was great to
hear one kid shoot down a complex metaphor as meaningless only to be challenged
by another who had grasped why the metaphor was in fact perfect.
Reading one’s own
work and answering questions about how and why you wrote such and such a line
can work well too. It helps to demystify the writing process and bring it into
the realm of the possible for the students. But for any of this to work, if I
had my way, I would issue a wholesale ban on sing-song rhythmic, rhyming poetry
in TV adverts. They’re everywhere at the moment and they’re the
equivalent of high-fat, high-salt, processed, fast food to my mind. I’ve seen
so many good ideas in class ruined by the tyranny of sing-song rhyme and the
absurdities of syntax and sense it frequently produces. And I’m not against rhyme
at all, when used well. Or a bit of fast food once in a while. But sometimes it
feels that this is the only kind of ‘poetry’ that exists outside of educational
institutions.
When I was a
schoolboy, it was a couple of poems by Hughes and Auden that blew me away. And
all it took was to be presented with the work and given time to read, re-read
and think about it. Sometimes you just need to present a great poem to a class.
One, some, and maybe all will get it.
I like that
idea of getting them to reconstruct poems, but I think you also touch on an
even more important point about being given the time to read, re-read and
think. So I wonder if you think that poetry’s compact nature, the fact that it
can be slotted into the gaps in everyday life, is its secret weapon in the
battle to grab attention?
Hmm, that would
seem logical wouldn’t it? Although a good lyric poem is a bit like the Tardis.
It’s much bigger inside than it looks and you can squeeze through its door never
to be seen again as you wander its corridors and chambers. People often claim
they have no time to read (poetry, or at all) and I routinely say that it takes
a minute or two to read a poem. But it’s not about the real time of reading,
it’s the time the mind, the ears, the breath take to savour and explore it
fully.
And that’s just
lyric poetry; once you’re onto Paradise Lost or The Changing Light at
Sandover you can’t appeal to brevity or quick digestibility any more. The
thing is to recalibrate life so we all have a little more time and space to
read and think. Sounds idealistic. Probably is. Having said all that, dwelling
on a Dream Song over lunch is a good start. Eighteen lines, one hour:
not a bad ratio.
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SoBe It
If I fall in love, and I think I will,
I may have to leave Miami first.
Who wuz it now wiv whom I wuz in wuv?
All those charter boats, art deco sunsets
and waitresses I tried to hit upon
in Biscayne des-per-a-tion
cling to the windshield of my Flydrive mind.
Crawling through your tome, Bret Easton,
trying to pretend the week apart to make up both our minds
had not made up her mind the very second she suggested it.
You dick.
Angler of occluded hopes, those sunburnt optimisms.
Block them, factor 451.
Are you going out in those shorts in this cold?
I've got a fishing trip. Have read my Benchley and my Junger,
got the hunger for a day's sea breeze,
some finny kills, the macho tackle,
accessories, success stories. I get no bites.
But the skipper and a baby blue shark
connect; on deck the Lindy Hop of death.
Swiss army knife of evolution, trying
all his blades, his tools, his gizmos,
carving esses in the air, winding down.
That mournful mouth. Turn your frown upside down.
The hatch to the hold's yanked open and our shark,
still twitching's kicked on down, takes the longest time
to drown.
Earth
God's gobstopper:
first mouthed to be last swallowed,
blue-green baubled gobsmacker.
Without the lunar counterweight,
the grave embrace's tidal tug,
we'd pop our dislocated poles
and shudder like a shook snow globe
and every shook snow globe on Earth
would synchronise and stormy flakes
would regulate themselves and lovely chaos
might abate. And then where would we be?
Somewhere someone's daughter asks,
'If the world is round, why is a frozen lake flat?'
This is the planet of daughters and sons,
the noisy neighbour, noise polluter,
party thrower, troublemaker,
incubator, hibernator, estivator, terminator.
Such sights. Where to start? Where will it all end?
Deep in the belly of the old star mother?
The blown red placenta, the giving one's all.
Neptune
You're so blue
you probably think that Jarman's Blue
is about you.
You're the source of all blue,
of Edwin Morgan's 'Little Blue Blue',
inexhaustiblue,
bluemungous, ur-blue.
Earth blue held up to you
is muck ball brown and grass stain green,
our oceans but a drop,
a dust of moth,
a mote of you.
Wednesday, 14 December 2011
Promises, promises
I've been pretty tardy about posting on here just lately, for one reason and another, but I plan to spring back into life next week - the holiday's going to consist of little other than reading and writing, if I have anything to do with it.
There'll be an interview with Salt poet Simon Barraclough, talking about his splendid collection Neptune Blue, among other things. There'll be my usual rather slapdash end of year lists. There'll be a a piece on colour in poetry that I've been meaning to finish for ages. Likewise, I plan to add the finishing touches to two or three reviews that have been gathering dust for a while. There'll be a look at a couple of pieces of nature writing I've been enjoying recently (and one of them is a truly extraordinary book). Oh, and there'll also be an interview and poetry from another Salt poet, Isobel Dixon.
There - that's what the Radio Times would have called a bumper Christmas and New Year package.
There'll be an interview with Salt poet Simon Barraclough, talking about his splendid collection Neptune Blue, among other things. There'll be my usual rather slapdash end of year lists. There'll be a a piece on colour in poetry that I've been meaning to finish for ages. Likewise, I plan to add the finishing touches to two or three reviews that have been gathering dust for a while. There'll be a look at a couple of pieces of nature writing I've been enjoying recently (and one of them is a truly extraordinary book). Oh, and there'll also be an interview and poetry from another Salt poet, Isobel Dixon.
There - that's what the Radio Times would have called a bumper Christmas and New Year package.
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Wednesday, 7 December 2011
The pamphlet process
I've been catching up on Leicester poet Roy Marshall's account of putting together his debut poetry chapbook, Gopagilla, due out from Crystal Clear Creators in March next year. I'm always intrigued by the process of putting together collections, and I agree wholeheartedly with what Roy says about input from an editor - I've always enjoyed having to argue the case for some poems, or for certain passages between them.
I can identify, too, with what he says about laying all his possible poems out on the floor, to work out which ones fit with each other. I'm just tentatively starting the process of doing that with some new poems myself, although more with a view to deciding which might make up the core of a subsequent collection than to coming up with any kind of finished line-up. It makes the house look even more of a mess than usual, of course, but it's surprising how often you notice something new about an old poem when you read it while you're ironing shirts, or peeling spuds.
I can identify, too, with what he says about laying all his possible poems out on the floor, to work out which ones fit with each other. I'm just tentatively starting the process of doing that with some new poems myself, although more with a view to deciding which might make up the core of a subsequent collection than to coming up with any kind of finished line-up. It makes the house look even more of a mess than usual, of course, but it's surprising how often you notice something new about an old poem when you read it while you're ironing shirts, or peeling spuds.
Thursday, 1 December 2011
More reasons to buy Morrison
Interesting review of Alan Morrison's Captive Dragons / The Shadow Thorns, over at Stride. It sounds like another in a growing list of fine collections from Waterloo Press - political engagement and an unflinching take on real life issues are fast becoming their hallmark, although never at the expense of musicality or readability. I can't help also being delighted that the book contains a poem referencing one of HP Lovecraft's stories - high time, too.
Wednesday, 30 November 2011
HappenStance happening
I was away at the Hula Valley Birdwatching Festival in northern Israel last week. It was really excellent, but my one regret about going was that I missed the HappenStance reading in Nottingham at the weekend. As Matthew Stewart and Maria Taylor have written, it was clearly an event to remember. Next time, I hope...
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Poetry at the Flying Goose
The Flying Goose Cafe in Beeston High Road,
Nottingham, hosts a reading on Tuesday, December 13th, from 7.30pm, with the
featured readers Emily Hasler, Shaun Belcher, JT Welsch and Adrian Slatcher.
It's an open reading, though, so if you want to take a poem along to read, feel
free.
It's staged by the Nottingham Poetry Series
and Nottingham
Trent University. Entry is free, but donations of £3 are welcome.
I'm not sure if I'll be able to get along
that night, but past events have been excellent, and the cafe sells some
splendid cakes, so it's definitely one for the diary.
Tuesday, 29 November 2011
Speech Bubble
Interesting open mic night in Loughborough next Monday - there's a growing number of places to read at in the East Midlands all of a sudden. I'm supposed to be at a meeting that evening, but some diary-juggling may be possible.
Monday, 14 November 2011
Derwent Poetry Festival - some thoughts
I was only able to pop into the festival on Saturday afternoon, but I had enough time to see readings by Christopher James, Kathleen Jones, Clive Allen, Susanne Ehrhardt and Jo Bell, as well as to buy a couple more of Templar's beautifully produced books (Clive's collection Violets, and the 2011 anthology, Bliss), and chat with Wayne Burrows and Roy Marshall.
I'm pushed for time, so I won't attempt any genuine review of the readings (they were excellent, though). But here's three thoughts that occurred to me...
1 Introducing one of his poems, To Read The Relationship between the Residents and the Surfers in Newquay, Clive mentioned that he had never surfed, or been to Newquay, but that he saw no reason why that should stand in the way of him writing the poem. Increasingly, that's how I feel. Not that there's anything wrong with facts finding their way into a poem sometimes, but it probably gets a bit overdone, and we probably all know the feeling you get where you try to cram all that research into the poem. Far better to wing it now and then, I think.
2 St Guthlac seems to find his way into contemporary English poetry more than any of his fellow saints, and should be declared the patron saint of English poetry forthwith. He cropped up in one of Christopher James' poems (a really fine one about fen-skaters), I've seen him mentioned in another within the last few weeks, he cropped up in Tom Chivers' How To Build A City, and he was in one of my poems in Troy Town (which, alarmingly, I've completely forgotten the title of, and I haven't got it to hand to check). Guthlac spent a large part of his life as a hermit on the fen island of Crowland, driven half-mad by the isolation, hunger, the ague, the effects of eating hallucinogenic plants, and regular visits from a whole tribe of demons. You can decide for yourself whether that makes him more or less suitable for the post.
3 Clive Allen also, in the introduction to another poem, described poetry as "a complicated way of being ignored". That might be my current favourite definition of poetry.
I'm pushed for time, so I won't attempt any genuine review of the readings (they were excellent, though). But here's three thoughts that occurred to me...
1 Introducing one of his poems, To Read The Relationship between the Residents and the Surfers in Newquay, Clive mentioned that he had never surfed, or been to Newquay, but that he saw no reason why that should stand in the way of him writing the poem. Increasingly, that's how I feel. Not that there's anything wrong with facts finding their way into a poem sometimes, but it probably gets a bit overdone, and we probably all know the feeling you get where you try to cram all that research into the poem. Far better to wing it now and then, I think.
2 St Guthlac seems to find his way into contemporary English poetry more than any of his fellow saints, and should be declared the patron saint of English poetry forthwith. He cropped up in one of Christopher James' poems (a really fine one about fen-skaters), I've seen him mentioned in another within the last few weeks, he cropped up in Tom Chivers' How To Build A City, and he was in one of my poems in Troy Town (which, alarmingly, I've completely forgotten the title of, and I haven't got it to hand to check). Guthlac spent a large part of his life as a hermit on the fen island of Crowland, driven half-mad by the isolation, hunger, the ague, the effects of eating hallucinogenic plants, and regular visits from a whole tribe of demons. You can decide for yourself whether that makes him more or less suitable for the post.
3 Clive Allen also, in the introduction to another poem, described poetry as "a complicated way of being ignored". That might be my current favourite definition of poetry.
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Thursday, 10 November 2011
A Night of HappenStance
Six HappenStance poets from as far away as Spain will be gathering for a reading
downstairs at Lee Rosy’s in Nottingham (17, Broad Street, NG1 3AJ – opposite the Broadway cinema) on 26th November, from 7.30pm. Entrance is £4, or £3 for concessions.
Helena Nelson (editor of HappenStance Press), Ross Kightly, Marilyn
Ricci, Robin Vaughan-Williams, DA Prince, and Matthew Stewart (who will be in
the country to launch his new pamphlet, Inventing Truth) are the readers.
That's six really fine poets, and I only wish I could be there to hear them – I'll be away because of work.
Helena will also be
adjudicating the Nottingham Open Poetry Competition at 2.45pm at the Mechanics
Institute (at 3 North Sherwood Street, Nottingham, NG1 4AX).
Monday, 7 November 2011
New Walk reading / Grace Nichols & John Agard show
Ian Parks and Alan Jenkins are reading as part of the Literary Leicester Festival this Thursday at 6pm, in the Ogden Lewis Seminar Suite in the University of Leicester's Fielding Johnson Building. Entry is free, but you need to book tickets - details are here.
Straight afterwards (well, at 7.30), you can get along to the Peter Williams Lecture Theatre in the Fielding Johnson Building for Grace Nichols' and John Agard's joint performance show Sunris and Man To Pan, which look at two iconic Caribbean metaphors of transfiguration – Carnival and Steel Pan. Further details are here.
Straight afterwards (well, at 7.30), you can get along to the Peter Williams Lecture Theatre in the Fielding Johnson Building for Grace Nichols' and John Agard's joint performance show Sunris and Man To Pan, which look at two iconic Caribbean metaphors of transfiguration – Carnival and Steel Pan. Further details are here.
Labels:
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Friday, 28 October 2011
The waiting game
I've been thinking hard about the writing process this week. After hydrodaktulopsychicharmonica came out last November, I wrote very little poetry until April, when I did NaPoWriMo. From then until the start of September, I did little more than revise a few of the poems written during that month.
It wasn't exactly writer's block, though. I don't think I've ever exactly rushed to get poems out there - I tend to revise a lot and the last book, for example, contained some poems that had their origin six or seven years ago - but I had decided that I'd really take my time before sending anything out to magazines, e-zines, etc.
In the last six weeks or so, though, I've started to write some new material alongside the continuing revisions, and rather to my surprise most of the poems seem to have been arriving 'complete'. That's not to say finished, but whole poems, rather than fragments (at other times I've often had beginnings and endings with no middle, or middle sections in desperate need of something to bookend them). I've resisted the temptation to send any of them out there yet, but it has had me wondering about how much of the process of composition takes place before you ever pick up pen, or keyboard. I have, I realise, been slowly writing these poems in my head for the last 12 months - it's only now the urge to get them down on paper has become irresistible.
Then, at Monday night's Nine Arches/Crystal Clear Creators Shindig, I was going to read a poem called Azul at the open mic. I started writing it about three years ago, and I'd read it a couple of times previously, at the Colour Conference at Warwick University earlier this year, and at the last Nottingham Shindig. I'd always felt that it needed more tweaking though, and as I sat there on Monday night, I suddenly realised what. I changed things around when I read it, rewrote it when I got home, and I think it's now a much stronger poem. Again, I wonder if the rewriting's actually been taking place each time I've read it, each time I've looked at it in frustration and bafflement.
So, the waiting game seems to be working for me at the moment. The problem, of course, is knowing when to trust first impressions and go with something the moment it hits the page. But that'd be a nice problem to have.
It wasn't exactly writer's block, though. I don't think I've ever exactly rushed to get poems out there - I tend to revise a lot and the last book, for example, contained some poems that had their origin six or seven years ago - but I had decided that I'd really take my time before sending anything out to magazines, e-zines, etc.
In the last six weeks or so, though, I've started to write some new material alongside the continuing revisions, and rather to my surprise most of the poems seem to have been arriving 'complete'. That's not to say finished, but whole poems, rather than fragments (at other times I've often had beginnings and endings with no middle, or middle sections in desperate need of something to bookend them). I've resisted the temptation to send any of them out there yet, but it has had me wondering about how much of the process of composition takes place before you ever pick up pen, or keyboard. I have, I realise, been slowly writing these poems in my head for the last 12 months - it's only now the urge to get them down on paper has become irresistible.
Then, at Monday night's Nine Arches/Crystal Clear Creators Shindig, I was going to read a poem called Azul at the open mic. I started writing it about three years ago, and I'd read it a couple of times previously, at the Colour Conference at Warwick University earlier this year, and at the last Nottingham Shindig. I'd always felt that it needed more tweaking though, and as I sat there on Monday night, I suddenly realised what. I changed things around when I read it, rewrote it when I got home, and I think it's now a much stronger poem. Again, I wonder if the rewriting's actually been taking place each time I've read it, each time I've looked at it in frustration and bafflement.
So, the waiting game seems to be working for me at the moment. The problem, of course, is knowing when to trust first impressions and go with something the moment it hits the page. But that'd be a nice problem to have.
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Wednesday, 26 October 2011
The Fizz 10
Polesworth's well-established poetry reading and open mic night, The Fizz, welcomes three poets from Cork - Afric McGlinchey, Colm Scully and Jennifer Matthews - on November 3rd, as part of the Coventry-Cork Literature Exchange.
It's worth pointing out that it's on a Thursday night (not the usual Tuesday) and at the Tythe Barn on Bridge Street, rather than in the Abbey Refectory as usual. It all starts at 7.30pm, and there'll be open mic slots available, as well as refreshments. See you there...
It's worth pointing out that it's on a Thursday night (not the usual Tuesday) and at the Tythe Barn on Bridge Street, rather than in the Abbey Refectory as usual. It all starts at 7.30pm, and there'll be open mic slots available, as well as refreshments. See you there...
Tuesday, 25 October 2011
Full house
Last night's Shindig at The Western might have been the best yet, courtesy of a great line-up of featured readers, the usual high standard of open mic contributions, and a large and generous audience.
Mal Dewhirst, of Polesworth Poetry Trail fame, kicked off the readings in the first (Nine Arches Press) half of the night. I particularly enjoyed his piece inspired by Pooley Country Park, but all of what he read had a strong sense of place, and he's not afraid to take unusual approaches to his subject, either - I'd like to see a lot more of the archaeological 'dig' poem he read from.
It was good to be reminded of just how good a poet Nine Arches co-editor Jane Commane is, too, with her reading touching on areas as diverse as music, racehorses and maps (the latter being a subject I always find irresistible). Her bypass poem, too, was one I'd like to hear again and again.
The second half of the night, run by Crystal Clear Creators, first featured Charles Lauder Jr. I enjoyed his poems a lot - there was just enough of a transatlantic flavour to them to make them constantly surprising. I'll look forward to seeing his pamphlet from CCC next year.
Finally, Wayne Burrows, editor of Staple, read from a variety of new work. I think his apple-inspired sequence (the green things, I mean, not the Steve Jobs empire) was my favourite section, but the loose translations of Czechoslovakian pop songs from the 60s ran it pretty close.
Loads of excellent open mic readings - Mark Goodwin's poem about climbing Cader Idris with his daughter was as perfectly balanced as you'd expect, and it was nice to hear Catullus get a look in, thanks to Graham Norman. What I enjoy most is that the open mic readers are really starting to work off each other - each Shindig now seems to throw up certain themes which the poets just naturally fall into step with.
Mal Dewhirst, of Polesworth Poetry Trail fame, kicked off the readings in the first (Nine Arches Press) half of the night. I particularly enjoyed his piece inspired by Pooley Country Park, but all of what he read had a strong sense of place, and he's not afraid to take unusual approaches to his subject, either - I'd like to see a lot more of the archaeological 'dig' poem he read from.
It was good to be reminded of just how good a poet Nine Arches co-editor Jane Commane is, too, with her reading touching on areas as diverse as music, racehorses and maps (the latter being a subject I always find irresistible). Her bypass poem, too, was one I'd like to hear again and again.
The second half of the night, run by Crystal Clear Creators, first featured Charles Lauder Jr. I enjoyed his poems a lot - there was just enough of a transatlantic flavour to them to make them constantly surprising. I'll look forward to seeing his pamphlet from CCC next year.
Finally, Wayne Burrows, editor of Staple, read from a variety of new work. I think his apple-inspired sequence (the green things, I mean, not the Steve Jobs empire) was my favourite section, but the loose translations of Czechoslovakian pop songs from the 60s ran it pretty close.
Loads of excellent open mic readings - Mark Goodwin's poem about climbing Cader Idris with his daughter was as perfectly balanced as you'd expect, and it was nice to hear Catullus get a look in, thanks to Graham Norman. What I enjoy most is that the open mic readers are really starting to work off each other - each Shindig now seems to throw up certain themes which the poets just naturally fall into step with.
Tuesday, 18 October 2011
Best British Poetry 2011 - a sample
I've not got round to posting anything from Salt's Best British Poetry 2011 yet, but over at Michelle McGrane's Peony Moon today, there are poems from Kayo Chingonyi, Abigail Parry and Jon Stone, plus links to them reading the poems. Enjoy...
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